Advice.
Uh oh! What has Kailani found??

Just in case people are unfamiliar with it, dotted balloons = whispering! I lowered the opacity a bit on these balloons as an experiment to emphasize it, despite normally disliking transparent balloons. But I think it works!

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Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspective errors and size inconsistencies.