Simple questions. I'm sure they won't lead to any sort of depressing or hardcore topics!

This page turned out WAY nicer than last page and I'm super pleased.

Favorite panel: 2
Least Favorite panel: 1

Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspective errors and size inconsistencies.
-The negative space in panel 2 (big one). Originally the balloons went over there but it was a little confusing, and I didn't really notice it was odd looking until it was too late so ssssh

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